Narrative Writing Week 7

Hey Everyone! Here is my narrative writing for this week, hope you enjoy it!

The harsh smoke filled my lungs and my heart was pounding out of my chest. I grabbed Lily’s hand, “Quick! Get outside and find your dad” I told her. I made sure the cats got outside before I did. It was cold outside and I was gasping for air. I reached for my phone in my pocket, uh oh, I left it inside. I had to sprint back into the flames engulfing my home. My legs were shaking and my hands were numb. I reached for my phone sitting on the marble benchtop but it was too late, my legs went weak and collapsed onto the hard cold ground…

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